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Shadaze Part 2 New home

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BLAZE POV

Me,Amy and rouge get to the orphanage that looks like a palace. It's huge Rouge pushes the the big black doors where were greeted by the warmth coming from the fire place. Every eye seems to be on me Amy and rouge i hear whispers among them what could they possibly be talking about

"You two wait here while i talk to the owner Olivia" i heard Rouge say

me and amy agree and wait outside

ROUGE POV

i am really nervous about asking Olivia if these two can stay Olivia is nice sometimes but if you get on her nerves two many times like i do then he turns into a right devil but if i use the  puppy dog and talk about how they need Parents and all that and she will let them stay

Knock Knock

"Come in" Olivia says

"Hey Olivia can i ask you for a favor?" i ask her hoping she'll say yes

"Let me guess you found some girls who are Orphans and need a place to stay i'm i right?"

"Please they really need a place to stay" I beg

"i'm not sure you always do this Rouge"

"The last time i promise PLEASE???" I really hope she agrees

"Fine but it has to be the last time now Bring them in" She said  

"Thanks Hun" I say as i open the door to get Blaze and amy

"Hey blaze and amy come in and meet Olivia" I say with joy in my voice

"ok" they both said in unison

Normal POV

Annabel started to inspect the girls to see if they would fit in

"So what ya think Olivia" Rouge asked

"Well they both are pretty you should fit right in at mobius high we do thongs a little differently here" Olivia said which gave Blaze and Amy a confused look

"What do you mean?" Blaze asked

"If you look good,good grades at school and are basically a treat to be around then you  
can stay otherwise you have to go" Olivia explained


"Who determines all this? Amy asked

"The boys fathers so be prepared to impress the boys" Olivia said with a giggle

"Well you guys get some rest it's late you can stay with rouge she will give you the uniform and all the things you need"

All the girls walked out. Amy and blaze followed rouge to her room to see three beds.

AMY'S POV

"These two are yours so pick which ever" Rouge said

I went for the one closest to the window leaving Blaze with the one on the other half of the room

"Well i guess this one is mine" I say and yawn afterwards

"Yeah well we should go to bed it's gonna be a big day tomorrow" Rouge said falling asleep

and with that being said we all fell asleep and entered the land of dreams


IN THE MORNING

BLAZE POV

I open my eyes to see Rouge and Amy in the uniform hovering above me

"Wake up Blaze time to get ready" I hear amy say

I drag myself t of bed, have a shower and put on my uniform.The uniform is a white shirt with a red Jacket and a REALLY SHORT blue skirt. I put my hair up in a ponytail and walk towards rouge and amy

"Hey you ready to go" i ask

"OMG you look AMAZING" rouge implied

"Yeah you" amy agreed

"whatever let's just go" i said as i grabbed my bag

we all went downstairs to hear everyone whispering.....again but it's too early to start a fight so i just leave it

"Hey honey and marine" i hear rouge say

"hey rouge who are your friends" the cat asked  

rouge introduces us all to each other and we get along well we all eat are breakfast and get ready to go on the bus as we enter the bus we go and sit at the back where no one dared to sit rouge is apparently popular here and since she looks so good i think she is popular with the boys too. as we come off the bus me and amy look at the school we have dreamed to go to and now were here. At mobius hugh
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Artemis-Knightmoon's avatar
Very good. I like the variety of vocabulary used and the idea in this part remains clear. You also manage to keep the audience interested too. ^^

A tip for the future though is try not to switch pov so much. For some readers it may get annoying. Instead longer more in one characters pov at a time as it can create greater impact upon the reader.

I apologise if that sounded rude. Good work though! ^^